“ What?!
About her!
Did I hear ‘Her’ true?!
Who is she?
What’ s the relationship between He and She?! “

If you are little bit curious, desire to know strange things, you would probably ask yourself these questions.
Even you might think that she is suppose to be my lover.!
Oh, what a shame on me. But if it works I would succeed to drive your mind away whenever I want to.
Ok, let’ s stop joking around, we have got to talk Turkey.
I am going to bend over backwards to introduce her.
Where should I start from?
It is no matter, let’ s just begin.
I would like to her characteristic first.
She is very beautiful, just like angels.
With hazel eyes, and brown hairs.
I would like to talk her about everything, but cat got my tongue. Because my English was not so good.!
Would you find the clue, and distinguish her explicitly?
If you was unable to recognize her, you would meet her soon in the class, standing in front of yourself.

OH MY GOD!!DO U LIVE IN DREAMS??

Wow! How romantic you are! I hope you find her az soon az possible.

)):D
it So ROMANTIC?!?!
OMG!!:D
well…
it seems that it really is! but I wonder If U wanted to write this ROMANTIC or not!!
are u really in LOVe???
well , another question: what is with the photo?! should we lokk for her Hazel eyse in the wild red text?!:D
well…
Be HappY

-T

Hi Metti,
Great post.  Your English is really good.  You use complex sentences and have very few mistakes.  Also, you seem to know quite a few idioms ("bend over backward,” “talk turkey,” etc.)

I’m not sure what the policy should be on romantic posts on this website.  We’re trying to keep the focus on architecture and city planning.  Of course, a citizen’s romantic needs are important.  Architecturally, spaces can be designed to facilitate romance.  Whole cities are considered romantic (Paris, I think, has that reputation).  What would it take to make our city a capitol of love?

But enough speculation, on to the mechanics of your post:

metti - 11 October 2008 01:31 PM

“ What?!
About her!
Did I hear ‘Her’ true?!
Who is she?
What’ s the relationship between He and She?! “

If you are little bit curious, desire to know strange things, you would probably ask yourself these questions.
Even you might think that she is suppose to be my lover.!
[You might even think that she is supposed to be my lover!]
Oh, what a shame on me.  ["Oh, shame on me!” or “Oh, what a shame!” - what are you trying to say?]But if it works [If what works?] I would succeed to drive [in driving] your mind away whenever I want to.  [Why do you want to succeed in driving someone’s mind away?]
Ok, let’ s stop joking around, we have got to talk Turkey.
I am going to bend over backwards to introduce her.
Where should I start from?
It is no matter, let’ s just begin.
I would like to [describe?  discuss?  relate?  ennummerate?]her characteristic s first.
She is very beautiful, just like angels.
With hazel eyes, and brown hairs [hair - not plural.  Unless she just has a few hairs.].
I would like to talk [to] her about everything, but cat got my tongue. Because [No need for “because”.] my English was[is] not so good.! [What’s up with the double punctuation?  “.!” Also, if you want to use past tense, “my English was not so good”, the sentence before should have been “I would like to have talked to her..."]
Would you find the clue, and distinguish her explicitly? [Awkward.  How about:  “Are you able to figure out the clues?  Can you tell who she is?"]
If you was [were, or are] unable to recognize her, you would [will] meet her soon in the class, standing in front of yourself.

Your English looks good on paper.  I’m sure if you feed that cat some kabob, he’ll let go of your tongue and you will be able to speak English really well.