Hello Hoda,
Thanks for your informative post. Aside from giving us information, what did you want to discuss? Your post would be improved by adding a question at the end, or by applying this information to our city.
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Hoda - 06 October 2008 02:26 AM
Depending on the physical conditions of cities, their features are based on five main factors:
1- Path: Path {question: in the original text, was “Path” formatted differently? Did it have italics or quotes?} is a factor which enables transportation in cities. Paths are consist of avenues, sidewalks, subways or railways.
2- Edge: Edge is a margin between two parts of the city, a gap along or across two continual parts of the city or even a junction on the railways.
3- District: District is a part of the city which is average to huge in size. Districts are identifiable by their distinct characteristics.
4- Node: Nodes are important parts of the city in which the observer can enter or be placed such as a junction of two roads.
5- Landmark: Landmarks are some parts of the city of which the observer can identify different parts of the city. For landmarks the observer cannot enter those parts such as buildings, signs and stores.