Dear Mn,
Thanks for your post! I’m looking forward to seeing your avatar soon as well.
Here are my notes on your grammar:
mn.mehraeen - 05 October 2008 09:40 AM
After the second world war finished,most cities had been distroyed and poeple had started to reconstruct their buildings.Although they’ve rebuilt their cities,they had many problems with them.since then,civic design have apeared and till now it’s one of the most demanded fields in the world.
You can delete “finished”. “After the second world war” conveys the thought by itself.
You don’t have enough space after any of your punctuation marks. You need one space after a comma, two spaces after a full stop. This is extremely important.
You have a few spelling errors: destroyed, people, appeared, until (or ‘til).
You need to work on the agreement of your verbs. Sometimes, within the same sentence, you use have and had. In some cases, you don’t need them at all. You can just use a simple past or present tense. It all depends on what you’re trying to say.
Your final statement, “now it’s one of the most demanded fields in the world” is unsupported. This is known as “peacocking”. Here’s an article on how to avoid peacock terms.