Dear Mona,
Thanks for your post!
And now, on to grammar:
The subject that i literally want to talk,is Urbanism.U know, Urbanism is the newest field that talks a bout cities,buildings,desinging,how to see the cities obviously,how to predict the future clearly,think a bout nature ,people & mainly relatesd to making people-friendly towns !! Urbanism is the artistic major but mostly looks like a architect.
This field is new & this is the best time for me & my friends to follow it & being amoused to continue it to the higher degrees ..Good Luck.
Capitalize “I”.
“Literally” seems out of place.
You have the usual punctuation and spacing issues - no space before the punctuation, one space after a comma, two spaces after a full stop.
No need to capitalize “urbanism”.
“About” is one word.
Only a few spelling errors: designing, amused.
There are a couple of article errors: “the artistic major” should be “an artistic major”; “an architect”, not “a”.
I’m not sure what you mean by “& being amused to continue it”.
Questions on content:
There is a theme emerging here. Both you and “MAAH” state that urbanism is “the newest field”. Where did this idea come from? What do you mean by “newest field”?
I’m not sure how someone would see a city “obviously”. Please elaborate.
You make some bold claims about urbanism! I didn’t know you could predict the future with it. I thought only prophets could “predict the future clearly”, and even then, that there was ambiguity and room for free will to alter prophecy. From what you say, it seems that prophets simply enrolled in the wrong major!
Tell me more about the future.
