Driver’s License - گواهینامه رانندگی
Posted: 14 September 2008 06:51 AM   [ Ignore ]  
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Tell us about your experience getting a driver’s license.  How would you prefer your experience to be?
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Posted: 05 October 2008 03:48 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]  
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Hi,I got it just 9 mounthes ago. I love car driving and enjoy in it.I drove some kind’s of cars like:jeep sahra,Peugeot 206 SD, Peugeot 405, Kadilak, Mazda 323, Xantia, Pride…
I know the driving law and respect to it.
have a good day!
bye.

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Posted: 05 October 2008 03:54 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]  
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Hi, I am Matin Jelvani. I want to be an active member in this site, You will see! excaim
Be Success,
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{Try “Be successful” or “Wishing you success”, - Ed.}

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Posted: 05 October 2008 04:10 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]  
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Hi i like the driving alot but not the driving test any more.u know I Am so lucky because the policeman who taked the test from me was so kind and passed me although I had big mistakes[c??U KNOW I Was dying.that was this summer.but the important point is the car.what would happend if i had a beautiful car like santafe,azera,or…...

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Posted: 05 October 2008 10:59 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]  
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Hi, I got the driver’s licence just two month ago. I hope that won’t have any accident in my driving, I’ll try to do this.

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Posted: 05 October 2008 11:26 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 5 ]  
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Dear rp1989,

Congratulations on your driver’s license!  And thanks for your post.

Here are the notes on grammar:

rp1989 - 05 October 2008 03:48 AM

Hi,I got it just 9 mounthes ago. I love car driving and enjoy in it.I drove some kind’s of cars like:jeep sahra,Peugeot 206 SD, Peugeot 405, Kadilak, Mazda 323, Xantia, Pride…
I know the driving law and respect to it.
have a good day!
bye.

Punctuation:  You need to have one space after a comma, two spaces after a full stop or a colon.

Spelling errors:  months, Cadillac.  You should probably capitalize all the car names, including “Jeep Sahara”.

“Car driving” is OK, but you would more likely say “driving” by itself, or “driving a car”, “driving cars”, “driving my car.”

Your phrase “enjoy in it” seems to be missing something.  Do you enjoy doing something in your car?  Being in it?  Or do you simply enjoy it? 

The phrase “I drove some kinds of cars” is awkward.  The verb form you chose is not the best.  You could try “I have driven many kinds of cars, including…”  The word “kinds” does not require an apostrophe.

You wouldn’t “respect to” the law.  You simply “respect it.”

Capitalize the first letter of all sentences.

Great job!

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Posted: 13 October 2008 02:48 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 6 ]  
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What should I do?
I like driving very much.I got my license 1 month ago but no one lets me drive his/her car.
S confused o how can I improve my driving?

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Posted: 13 May 2010 10:56 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 7 ]  
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I got my driver’s licence quite easily . First I applied for learning licence & then within one month I got my permanent Licence . Total time it took was one & half months .
Thanks .
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