Dear rp1989,
Congratulations on your driver’s license! And thanks for your post.
Here are the notes on grammar:
rp1989 - 05 October 2008 03:48 AM
Hi,I got it just 9 mounthes ago. I love car driving and enjoy in it.I drove some kind’s of cars like:jeep sahra,Peugeot 206 SD, Peugeot 405, Kadilak, Mazda 323, Xantia, Pride…
I know the driving law and respect to it.
have a good day!
bye.
Punctuation: You need to have one space after a comma, two spaces after a full stop or a colon.
Spelling errors: months, Cadillac. You should probably capitalize all the car names, including “Jeep Sahara”.
“Car driving” is OK, but you would more likely say “driving” by itself, or “driving a car”, “driving cars”, “driving my car.”
Your phrase “enjoy in it” seems to be missing something. Do you enjoy doing something in your car? Being in it? Or do you simply enjoy it?
The phrase “I drove some kinds of cars” is awkward. The verb form you chose is not the best. You could try “I have driven many kinds of cars, including…” The word “kinds” does not require an apostrophe.
You wouldn’t “respect to” the law. You simply “respect it.”
Capitalize the first letter of all sentences.
Great job!